"Behind me I hear hundreds of gasps. I don't move, but I can see them: girls and boys we pass in the halls every day; the mothers in their nice summer dresses and the fathers tapping the rolled up program on their knees; the little brothers and sisters squirming in their seats.
'I'm an illegal alien,' Aisha repeats, harder, faster now." (151)
Wow.
Just wow.
Aisha has out done herself again. I really am happy that she begun to get stronger towards the end of the speech. I mean, literally. Aisha, the big bold person that we used to know, seems to be drifting in and out of herself as in a ghosty type of way, kinda thing.
I think that I was a little disapointed overall by the book.
I never found out what happend to Ali-Uncle (my favorite character) other than he disapears.
And I never find out what happend to Tareq either.
Hmm...I don't know.
I was left just sorta hanging.
Thursday, March 26, 2009
Sunday, March 22, 2009
Water
"At first I can't get the words out-its like pushing against a wall of water. " pg. 132
Another water relating thing. I keep seeing things pop out of knowhere. Not really, they do have some relation. I like the little description's that are just popping around that say a lot. This one in particular says a lot.
For Nadira, I think gathering the courage for her to prove something, well I don't really understand how that's a difficult thing. I mean, if I took her spot, and I had a way of getting my father out, I would not be afraid to say what I had to say. In fact, knowing that I had a chance to do something great, that would make me feel bolder and stronger. I don't know. But I do like this sentence. It really shows the complication that Nadira felt.
Tuesday, March 17, 2009
"American-Born" (Chapter 12)
"I look at her, amazed. She's American-born. I can tell by her accent and the way she holds herself. I didn't even know you could do something like that. I sure didn't know a girl could do something like that." pg. 106
HA!
Hahahahaha...ha.
This quote actually made me smile. I could make my own picture of Nadira's face. Bewildered. Going to an all girls school, that teaches you to empower yourself, it's different for us, if we heard something like "I'm going to be a geologist", our reaction would simply be like "Oh...thats "so cool"." Now taking Nadira's reaction, I feel like she's more traditional.
Actually, I know she's more traditional. The question is...why wouldn't a girl be able to be a geologist? Its the United States of America for crying out loud. I think we've moved past this sexist stage, and for Nadira, finding that this isn't a traditional setting, is, I think, rather interesting for her.
HA!
Hahahahaha...ha.
This quote actually made me smile. I could make my own picture of Nadira's face. Bewildered. Going to an all girls school, that teaches you to empower yourself, it's different for us, if we heard something like "I'm going to be a geologist", our reaction would simply be like "Oh...thats "so cool"." Now taking Nadira's reaction, I feel like she's more traditional.
Actually, I know she's more traditional. The question is...why wouldn't a girl be able to be a geologist? Its the United States of America for crying out loud. I think we've moved past this sexist stage, and for Nadira, finding that this isn't a traditional setting, is, I think, rather interesting for her.
Monday, March 16, 2009
Chapter Eleven (A.K.A-->Aisha's gone "Out of It".)
“The next day she shows up at lunch looking a little odd, like she’s worked too hard at her appearance.” Pg. (92)
Wrong. Wrong. Wrong. Wrong. Wrong! Imagine Nadira’s face when she saw her sister. Aisha going from well developed, bold, well dressed, school educated bold person turning into a slow, not clean, too polished, fake-ish look. Aisha is falling apart. Its clear. I feel like her world has completely shattered and she doesn’t know how to put it together.
Wrong. Wrong. Wrong. Wrong. Wrong! Imagine Nadira’s face when she saw her sister. Aisha going from well developed, bold, well dressed, school educated bold person turning into a slow, not clean, too polished, fake-ish look. Aisha is falling apart. Its clear. I feel like her world has completely shattered and she doesn’t know how to put it together.
Thursday, March 12, 2009
Discontinued...(Chapter 10)
"The more Taslima talks, the worse she makes things with her agitated, angry air. Aisha shifts from her seat, tucks her hair behind her ears, and speaks very softly.
"If you please, miss," she says. "We don't know the rules. We've never been in a station house before. Can you tell me where we are allowed to make phone calls?"
The officer softens a bit. Her gaze slides back to Taslima with her punky short hair sticking up like bristles, her wiry, tense body. Then she regards Aisha, who is standing with her ankles pressed togetger, chin tipped up, showing the wide planes of her cheeks. I know this look in Aisha: it's the girl who knows how to please everybody to get what she wants.
"Call out in the hall," the woman suggests." pg. 84
And the winner is...Aisha! Naturally. I think Aisha presented herself in an excellent way in order to "get what she wants". Her performance was going well until...
"Please miss," she begins. "I understand that you're just doing your job. But there is such a larger issue here. My uncle being held like this, it's a violation of his civil liberties—" pg. 85
This was followed by...
"Save it," the woman interrupts. "You want to talk about rights, you don't have a right to sit in this area. We're just tryin' to make it easier for you folks." pg. 85
Talking about harsh! Aisha's performance was great until the supervisor cut her off completely. I actually think its highly unfair, the treatment. I mean, I understand that, like Aisha said, the woman is doing her job, but does she really have to say "You don't have a right to sit in this area." and what's with the last part? "We're just tryin' to make it easier for you folks." You could emphasize the you in the last sentence, and that would actually sound even harsher. Is it so difficult to take in the situation that they're in? The supervisor lady/woman person could be at least considerate. Perhaps taking Zuckerman's idea from today during class, might be interesting to look at. Maybe the supervisor woman was afraid that Aisha was going to actually say something worth hearing. Aisha was getting to a point.
Hmm...I don't know. The treatment of immigrants seems a little unfair to me.
"If you please, miss," she says. "We don't know the rules. We've never been in a station house before. Can you tell me where we are allowed to make phone calls?"
The officer softens a bit. Her gaze slides back to Taslima with her punky short hair sticking up like bristles, her wiry, tense body. Then she regards Aisha, who is standing with her ankles pressed togetger, chin tipped up, showing the wide planes of her cheeks. I know this look in Aisha: it's the girl who knows how to please everybody to get what she wants.
"Call out in the hall," the woman suggests." pg. 84
And the winner is...Aisha! Naturally. I think Aisha presented herself in an excellent way in order to "get what she wants". Her performance was going well until...
"Please miss," she begins. "I understand that you're just doing your job. But there is such a larger issue here. My uncle being held like this, it's a violation of his civil liberties—" pg. 85
This was followed by...
"Save it," the woman interrupts. "You want to talk about rights, you don't have a right to sit in this area. We're just tryin' to make it easier for you folks." pg. 85
Talking about harsh! Aisha's performance was great until the supervisor cut her off completely. I actually think its highly unfair, the treatment. I mean, I understand that, like Aisha said, the woman is doing her job, but does she really have to say "You don't have a right to sit in this area." and what's with the last part? "We're just tryin' to make it easier for you folks." You could emphasize the you in the last sentence, and that would actually sound even harsher. Is it so difficult to take in the situation that they're in? The supervisor lady/woman person could be at least considerate. Perhaps taking Zuckerman's idea from today during class, might be interesting to look at. Maybe the supervisor woman was afraid that Aisha was going to actually say something worth hearing. Aisha was getting to a point.
Hmm...I don't know. The treatment of immigrants seems a little unfair to me.
Tuesday, March 10, 2009
Nadira's Confidence (Chapter Nine)
"I think about what Ma said, how I'm patient and that one day people will see my slow, steady strength. And I keep thinking about Ali-Uncle, how he never hurries himself, and he always knows in advance what he's going to do or say. He once told me that every action, every word of his, is watched my Allah. If I say a word that is angry, he explained, then I should never be surprised by the harm. And if I say something good, then it is like watching my own garden grow, and that is the greatest pleasure ever. That's what Aisha and I are doing. We're planting a garden with our words. Our future. Everything careful and chosen well so the shoots come up strong and straight. It's as if Ali-Uncle's hands are still on our heads, warming us from the inside out." pg. 79
Well two main things, really. Ali-Uncle, seems like a really awesome old man! 8D
Literally. He has this way of words that seems to just have this "sink in" feeling. I like how he phrases the things with words. That to never be surprised by the harm, angry words could cause. I feel like Nadira is comparing herself to him. Which is good. He seems like a positive role model. Nadira seems to be going onto the positive side. Even though things aren't looking so good, she seems to be understanding how important it is for her to stick together with Aisha. She has good positive qualities that I think are revealing themselves to her. I really hope she continues to look towards her positive qualities! She thinks very deeply and I like her point of view. Keep on cruising, Nadira! We believe in you!
Chapter Seven&&Eight Highlight
"You can't do that!" I yell. "You can't just run off. Or tell Mr.Rashid the first thing that comes into your head!" Then I notice that Aisha is trembling. Her backpack slides off her arm, and she slouches to the ground, right next to the Zaro's Bread barrel full of Snapple bottles and banked in ice. Her eyes are glassy, far-off. I crouch down next to her. "Aisha, what's wrong?"
"I'm scared," she whispers. pg. 66
Well she admits that she's afraid. Aisha admitted what they were both thinking. Its sort of odd, to think that Nadira was thinking the exact same thing. They are all very worried for their father. I would be too. It seems like such a scary process. The scary thing out of all is that its "reality". This is real, and for Nadira I think that its complicated to understand that.
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